Monday, January 5, 2015

Stage 6: Fahrenheit 451 Rough Draft (Wordcount: 789)

            The novel Fahrenheit 451 by Ray Bradbury first begins by depicting Guy Montag, a fireman, as a person who appears to be settled in his life.  Montag has a well-respected job, a wife, and he has just recently purchased a new house.  It seems that his life is successfully progressing.  However, this impression shortly fades away.  As the reader gets to know Montag better, he/she sees his real character: the person who feels as a stranger in his own home, the person who does not express any feelings but fear, the person who has no friends, and, finally, the person who doubts his job, but is brave enough to take off his mask of happiness and acknowledge the reality with a bit of help from Clarisse, who as per Montag’s words “throw[s] back to…[him his] own expression…[his] own innermost trembling thought” (Bradbury 11).
            Montag lives with fear.  He’s frightened to get caught for keeping the books he’s supposed to burn to fulfill his duty.  Bradbury uncovers Montag’s paranoia by showing his reaction to the Mechanical Hound’s attacks.  Nevertheless, when off duty, Montag doesn’t destroy the books, but rather keeps them with the hope that the books may be that missing piece that might make him happy.  In his conversation with Faber, he admits, “We have everything we need to be happy, but we aren’t happy.  Something’s missing.  I looked around.  The only things I positively knew was gone was the books I’d burned in ten or twelve years.  So I thought the books might help” (Bradbury 82).  Ironically, instead of viewing the books as a threat, Montag tries to find happiness within them.
            Montag also appears to be a very lonely man.  The author reveals this by showing how he feels at home and through his relationship with his wife, Mildred.  As Montag comes home, he feels as if he’s “coming into the cold marbled room of a mausoleum after the moon has set” (Bradbury 11).  Not only does he feel unwelcome in his own house, but he also feels like a stranger who “is in someone else’s house…coming home late late at night, unlocking the wrong door, entering a wrong room, and bedding with a stranger....” (Bradbury 42).  In a few short conversations Mildred and Montag have, they don’t express too many emotions towards each other.  The two seem to exist together but live in two different worlds, neither sharing any common history nor knowing anything about each other.  For instance, Mildred and Montag can’t remember when or how they met.  They know so little about one another and have so little in common that they hardly even talk.  Montag is amazed about the fact that a husband and wife have something to talk about when Clarisse mentions that her “mother and father and uncle [are] sitting around, talking” (Bradbury 9). 
Surprisingly, or perhaps not surprisingly, Montag doesn’t report Faber to the authorities when they first meet at the park, in spite of the fact that he’s most certain that the man is in possession of books.  As “Faber held his hand over his left coat pocket and spoke… Montag knew if he reached out, he might pull a book of poetry from the man’s coat.  But he did not reach out” (Bradbury 75).  Montag pretends that he doesn’t know of the old man’s secret.  However, as he eventually turns to Faber for help, it clearly indicates that Montag always knew about Faber’s secret, but kept it to himself to protect the old man.  Evidently, Montag doesn’t view Faber as a threat to the society because of his access to the books.  Again, oddly enough, Montag doubts the danger that books may bring to the society even though his job is to destroy them for the reason that they impose a threat.
            “Are you happy?” asks Clarisse, leaving Montag feeling like “the stuff of a fantastic candle burning too long and now collapsing and now blown out.  Darkness.  He was not happy.  He was not happy.  He said the words to himself.  He recognized this as the true state of affairs” (Bradbury 12).  Even though it is Clarisse who provokes Montag to finally take off his mask of happiness, undoubtedly, this mask was already beginning to come off, as Montag has been questioning his life, his job, and the society, which he is a part of.  With Clarisse’s genuine wondering about his life, Montag is able to admit to himself that he hasn’t done much neither for his wife nor for his city.  He has not done anything to make the world better.
“Montag turned and glanced back.
What did you give to the city, Montag?
Ashes.
What did the others give to each other?
Nothingness” (Bradbury 156).


             

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