My Draft Reflection

1: I feel like I have a lot of good ideas that focus around my main idea of the different kinds of objective correlatives that Diaz uses throughout Drown.

2: I think I need to work on organizing my thoughts to make them flow better. I also need to explain more and use my experiences and emotions that have been evoked from Diaz's objective correlatives. 

3: My draft is like a bowl of salad, all mixed together and somewhat difficult to sort because everything just sticks together with the dressing.